Bathory

 

 

by

MARK THE SHARK

 

Revised by

CASSY HAVENS

 

 

Fourth Draft

2003-10-01

NORTHWESTERN PRODUCTIONS

(myoldaddywasntworking@hotmail.com)

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"BATHORY"

 

 

FADE IN:

 

 

BLACKNESS.

 

TEXT, WHITE ON BLACK. (IN ANCIENT FONT)

 

      "ELIZABETH BATHORY (1560-1613) of Hungary, known as the

      Blood Countess was real. She lived most of her life in

      the latter half of the sixteenth century. She is said to

      have tortured and killed over 650 virgin girls in order

      to bathe in their blood. Investigated for her alleged crimes

      at the beginning of the seventeenth century, she was never       convicted. Her infamy has become legendary."

 

Another SUPER appears below the written text.

 

      "This is a retelling of this legend..."

 

The WHITE TEXT turns blood red, then drips down the black screen. The CAMERA PULLS back as it reveals a full-sized rendering of the BATHORY COAT OF ARMS: the torso of a woman with outspread wings and wearing Athena's helmet above a dragon swallowing its own tail. In the middle of the circle formed by the dragon, are three wolves' teeth.

 

The OPENING TITLES are superimposed over the coat of arms.

 

STUDIO 11.14.67

presents

 

a

NORTHWESTERN

production of

 

a RIDLEY SCOTT film

 

CHRISTINA RICCI

is

 

B A T H O R Y

 

MICHAEL IRONSIDE

 

MAURY CHAYKIN

 

CAMERYN MANHEIM

 

ROMOLA GARAI

VIVIEN CARDONE

BENNO FURMANN

CILLIAN MURPHY

 

PETER STORMARE

EMBETH DAVIDTZ

 

and

F. MURRAY ABRAHAM

as "Pastor Ponikenuz"

 

casting by

CASSY HAVENS

and

MARK THE SHARK

a.c.e.

 

edited by

THELMA SCHOONMAKER

 

music by

HANS ZIMMERMAN

 

special make-up effects by

RICK BAKER

 

director of photography

FREDDIE FRANCIS

 

production designer

HENRY BUMSTEAD

 

screenplay by

MARK THE SHARK

 

executive producers

EDWARD HAVENS

CASSY HAVENS

 

produced by

MARK THE SHARK

 

directed by

RIDLEY SCOTT

 

 

Following CREDITS...

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

EXT. CASTLE ECSED - OUTER COURT - NIGHT

 

A SUPER in the bottom-right hand corner of the screen:

 

                  "CASTLE ECSED, 1569 A.D."

 

A hot summer night. It's the middle of the sixteenth century, 1569 to be exact. ARMED SOLDIERS casually stroll about the perimeter, where the stables and garrison are.

 

Soon, the outer court is SIEGED upon by angry PEASANT REBELS, with primitive weapons, axes, pitchforks, shovels, etc. They effectively take the castle by surprise.

 

AN ERUPTION OF VIOLENCE, the peasants set fire to the granary with torches. They proceed to set fire to anything they can, and it spreads quickly through the court.

 

The madness SPREADS throughout the courtyard. Soldiers are hacked to pieces with axes, servant girls are dragged out of the castle and raped right on the spot, and skulls are SMASHED IN with spiked clubs. The brutal acts of VIOLENCE are backlit by the ROARING FIRE of the burning castle.

 

Their leader, DOZSA, leads his men through the flanks.

 

INT. CASTLE ECSED - BEDROOM - NIGHT

 

Four NURSES hurriedly bundle up three young girls: ANICHKA (12), SHANDRA (13), and a YOUNG ELIZABETH BATHORY (VIVIEN CARDONE), three beautiful young girls with milky skin and reddish chestnut hair.

 

Elizabeth is the hardest to rouse; she sits up groggily in her bed. The amber glow of the roaring fire illuminates through the windows, casting sinister shadows.

 

                              NURSE

                        (Panicky whisper)

                  Elizabeth...we must hurry.

 

She scoops up the child.

 

INT. CASTLE ECSED - SECRET PASSAGEWAY - NIGHT

 

The FOUR NURSES carry the girls through a SECRET PASSAGEWAY in the castle, leading to a small wooded area.

 

EXT. CASTEL ECSED - HIDING SPOT - NIGHT

 

The Four Nurses stuff the girls behind a brush, and they observe the chaos from their wooded hiding place, trembling with fear. They are illuminated by the fiery glow of the burning castle.

 

Elizabeth observes the chaos with a child's fascination.

 

INT. CASTLE ECSED - ENTRANCE - NIGHT

 

The Peasant Rebels STORM into the castle. They drag SERVANTS out of rooms and place them before their leader DOZSA. He unsheathes a scythe and slices open one of their throats. Ruby specks of blood SPURT onto Dozsa, and scarlet tissue seeps out of the young girl's throat.

 

The Rebels proceed to torch the innards of the castle.

 

INT. CASTLE ECSED - DINING CHAMBER - NIGHT

 

A large, elegant DINING CHAMBER with a large table, clothe with the Bathory coat of arms woven into them. A PEASANT WITH A TORCH sets fire to the table.

 

INT. CASTLE ECSED - SERVANT QUARTERS - NIGHT

 

Two SERVANT GIRLS, no older than sixteen or seventeen, are pulled out from under two beds. They are forced onto the bed and wrapped with linen. Trapped in the bed sheets, they kick and scream trying to get out. Another PEASANT WITH A TORCH tosses the torch right onto the bed. It immediately is set ABLAZE with the two girls wrapped in linen being BURNED ALIVE.

 

EXT. CASTLE ECSED - HIDING SPOT - NIGHT

 

The NURSES and the GIRLS are huddled together. Young Elizabeth is prone, watching the madness unfold before her young eyes.

 

She crawls a little further from her nurses and sisters, for a better look at what's going on:

 

EXT. CASTLE ECSED - ELIZABETH'S POV - NIGHT

 

Everything is surreal, an exaggerated take on the carnage with the Peasant Rebels larger than life. They are backlit by the roaring fires that burn the granaries and the inside of the castle, appearing has mere shadows.

 

The Peasant Rebels rape the women and kill the men with vindictive and sadistic glee.

 

DOZSA and FOUR OF HIS MEN appear out of the castle. They step right in front the hiding area, laughing and talking amongst them.

 

EXT. CASTLE ECSED - HIDING SPOT - NIGHT

 

The NURSES hold the two older girls tighter. Anichka is holding back the urge to scream.

 

                              NURSE #2

                        (Panicky whisper)

                  Elizabeth...get back here...

 

DOZSA LOOKS in the direction of the two girls and their four nurses. Elizabeth crawls near a tree.

 

Shandra lets out a cry.

 

                              DOZSA

                  Over there!

 

The MEN advance on the hiding spot. They trample through the brush. Elizabeth quickly SCURRIES up a tree, an excellent climber for her age, and perches on a high branch, as the Peasant Rebels discover the two girls and their nurses.

 

Elizabeth WATCHES from the tree as the Peasant Rebels DRAG her sisters from out of their hiding spot.

 

Dozsa's Men force the women and children into a kneeling position before their leader. They laugh gleefully at their new find.

 

Elizabeth WATCHES in horror.

 

Dozsa's tears off the front of Nurse #2's dress. She SOBS as her breasts roam free through her ripped dress. All the girls SOB with fear. The NURSES plead for their lives in high-pitched voices (overlapping):

 

                              NURSE #1

                  Please! Please! Spare us! We will do

                  anything for you! We are at your

                  service!

 

                              NURSE #2

                  Please don't harm the children! Please

                  don't harm us! We will do whatever you

                  want! Please let us go!

 

                              NURSE #3

                  My body is yours to do as you wish to

                  it! Just please don't harm us or the

                  children!

 

                              NURSE #4

                  We haven't done anything to you! Please,

                  just let us go!

 

The SWISHING of DOZSA’S SCYTHE cuts off their PLEAS. He SLITS their throats, letting the blood run down their bodies. They drop to the ground like butchered pigs.

 

                              ANICHKA

                  Do you know who we are?!

 

                              SHANDRA

                  We are Bathorys! You will pay for

                  this!

 

Dozsa's Men LAUGH and mock them.

 

                              DOZSA'S MAN

                        (mock cry)

                  We are Bathorys! We are Bathorys!

 

Dozsa stops laughing. He becomes dead serious and looks straight into the two girls. With a voice deeper than they've ever heard before, DOZSA SPEAKS:

 

                              DOZSA

                  Do you know who I am? I am Dozsa, the

                  death of nobles! I have come to avenge

                  the blood of my father and brother!

 

Elizabeth WATCHES as the shades of men SWARM OVER her sisters' bodies. The sound of silk being ripped is heard, and Shandra gives a WEAK CRY like a hurt kitten.

 

Elizabeth continues to hide in the tree and look on with a mixture of horror and fascination.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

EXT. ECSED CASTLE - DAY

 

The castle has collapsed, now a smoldering pile of rock; still burning. The castle has been devastated, leaving corpses and burnt castle behind. Black smoke climbs up into the air.

 

EXT. ECSED CASTLE - ELIZABETH'S TREE - DAY

 

Elizabeth comes to. She shivers with fright. She looks down a few branches below her to see ANICHKA'S BLUE EYES gazing up at her, but her eyes are glossed over, lifeless. She's dead. Her naked bruised body is hanging upside down, swaying slightly in the breeze.

 

Hanging from another tree is SHANDRA.

 

On the ground below lay the grotesquely sprawled corpses of their nurses, their throats slashed. The blood has drained at the foot of the mossy oak, turning it a rusty red.

 

Elizabeth loses consciousness.

 

FADE TO BLACK:

 

The sound of SOFT FOOTSTEPS are audible.

 

FADE IN:

 

EXT. ECSED CASTLE - ELIZABETH'S TREE - DAY

 

Elizabeth comes to with a start. She LISTENS for the footsteps. Someone or something else is definitely here. She quivers with fear, clenching to her branch.

 

EXT. ECSED CASTLE - BURNING RUBBLE - DAY

 

To Elizabeth's relief, it is a beautiful white horse. Her HOOVES thump gently against the grass, appearing around from the burning mass of castle. This horse will be later known as LUNA.

 

Luna casually ambles along the grass, grunting, making the usual horse noises.

 

EXT. ECSED CASTLE - ELIZABETH'S TREE - DAY

 

Elizabeth, taken by the horse, calls to it in soft coos:

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Here, girl. Here, Luna. It's okay.

 

EXT. ECSED CASTLE - BURNING RUBBLE - DAY

 

Luna, the horse, looks at her with the kindest, most beautiful eyes ever. She steps a little closer to the tree.

 

Elizabeth, from the tree, keeps cooing the horse.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Come here, Luna. Come here, it's okay,

                  girl.

 

Luna steps over to the tree, coming to a stop right beside it. Elizabeth SLIDES DOWN from the tree, landing carefully on the horse's back. Luna doesn't seem to mind Elizabeth mounting her this way.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

EXT. LUNA - SUNDOWN (MOVING SHOT)

 

Elizabeth has her arms wrapped around Luna's neck. She rides her through the woods, keeping out of the open country. Elizabeth and the horse let the darkness blanket them, as they take the lonely trek through the woods.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

EXT. WOODS - NIGHT

 

An open clearing in the woods, with a tranquil pond, a waterfall streaming into it. Elizabeth rides slowly into this clearing. She carefully slides of Luna. She walks to the pond and looks into it. The moonlight bouncing back up to her milky-skinned face.

 

INT. POND - NIGHT

 

We look up at Elizabeth, her pale, frightened, and tortured face as the waters ripple.

 

EXT. WOODS - NIGHT

 

Elizabeth looks behind her. Luna's still there. Elizabeth lifts her dress up, stripping to her bare flesh, out of her elegant nightgown. Now, without a stitch of clothing, she DIVES into the pond.

 

INT. POND - NIGHT

 

She swims naked, bathed in snowy moonlight, through the black pond. She swims right down to the bottom, touching the soft muddy floor with her fingers, and walking across it with her hands. She swims to the surface.

 

EXT. POND - NIGHT

 

Elizabeth RESURFACES inside the waterfall, beating down on her face. She runs her fingers through her hair, letting the water touch every part of her soul.

 

She floats around in the pond, lying on her back.

 

EXT. WOODS - NIGHT

 

Elizabeth steps out of the pond, dripping wet. The horse is no longer there and her clothes are not where she left them.  Self-consciously, she wraps her arms around herself to conceal her nudity. Who else is here?

 

Suddenly, she SEES an animal prone in the grass. IT'S A LION! And under its paws are her clothes.

 

A lion in Hungary? Elizabeth has only seen lions in storybooks. She reacts surprisingly calmly; she gets down on all fours to better understand what she's seeing.

 

The lion LOOKS UP at her, staring at her curiously.

 

A PAW clamps down on her shoulder. She turns around and FAINTS. Connected to the paw is a four-foot creature, dressed in bark with leaves still protruding from it, look down on her through a knotted mass of curly white hair.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

EXT. WOODS - MORNING

 

Elizabeth comes to. She's lying naked between two STRANGE FURRY ANIMALS. She is semi-conscious, unsure of her surroundings. She passes out again.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

EXT. WOODS - A LITTLE LATER

 

Elizabeth comes to again. She groggily tries to discern what's going on, exhausted by the events leading up to this, she seems content now, maybe this was all a dream. She passes out again.

 

FADE TO BLACK:

 

A ROARING FIRE is audible.

 

FADE IN:

 

EXT. WOODS - DAY

 

An elderly woman, made up in furs to look like an animal, HIMLAT, tends a fire.

 

Elizabeth comes to, she's under a shelter, made of soldiers' armor, in between two furry sleeping bodies. Elizabeth tries to wedge herself free of the "strange creatures."

 

Himlat extends her hand, Elizabeth clasps it. Himlat helps the girl up. Elizabeth groggily examines her surroundings. She's in a camp of some sort, occupied by about FOURTEEN of these BEAST PEOPLE. The ones that are awake sit around the fire. They wear beast furs to disguise themselves.

 

Himlat smiles at the girl.

 

                              HIMLAT

                  Perchance you are the fairy sent to

                  feed us.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                        (threatening)

                  Perchance you can tell me what you

                  did to my clothes!

                        (a beat, softer)

                  And perchance you can tell me what

                  you are.

 

Himlat laughs.

 

                              HIMLAT

                  Your clothes have been washed and left

                  out to dry. It should be a good hour

                  before they'll be dry enough to wear

                  again. In the meantime, we could have

                  breakfast and could get acquainted.

 

Elizabeth nods and parks her naked bottom on a rock, a little uncomfortably.

 

                              HIMLAT (CONT'D)

                  My name is Himlat. My family is only

                  part natural, we mostly come from

                  other towns and villages where we

                  have been abused because of our

                  ugliness.

                        (a beat)

                  I myself have seen such wicked things

                  and have been employed to such foul

                  ends that I would never return to the

                  people's world.

 

Himlat pokes at the fire with her stick. Elizabeth looks at her curiously. Himlat's features are coarse (the features she hides under the furs, that is) and maybe a little deformed.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  What have you seen?

 

                              HIMLAT

                  Since childhood, I had been employed in

                  some way or another to help with rude

                  peasant sports. I had to nail cats to

                  posts for a village game where players

                  with their hands tied behind their backs

                  batter the poor creature to death.

 

Elizabeth frowns at this. Himlat continues:

 

                              HIMLAT (CONT'D)

                  The cats scratched and clawed,

                  occasionally gouging out one of their

                  eyes...

                        (a beat)

                  An occurrence that would give me grim

                  satisfaction. Later I had to clean the

                  village green, where men with clubs had  

                  beat a pig lifeless while their wives and

                  children cheered.

 

Himlat shakes her head bitterly.

 

                              HIMLAT (CONT'D)

                  As a young woman I had been charged with

                  taking corpses off the gibbet and removing

                  heads stuck on posts by the village

                  gate when they began to rot. At the time

                  of my first blood, a kindly woman had

                  taken me into her employ, paying me two

                  copper coins for the hands and penises of

                  corpses. I had learned many things from

                  this woman, but in the end this life

                  disgusting to me, and now I live here,

                  where I have met many others with stories

                  similar to mine.

 

A nearby Creature, (he will be known as CASTRATED) speaks. He never keeps his eyes from the ground, and never looks at Elizabeth herself.

 

                              CASTRATED

                        (sadly)

                  All of us have been mistreated in some

                  form. I had been castrated for looking

                  too keenly at a countess.

 

The other CREATURES creep to the fire and stretch their limbs out. Elizabeth NOTICES just how ugly they are, and being around so much deformity, she forgets for the moment that she is naked. They run into the woods to urinate. They return a beat later, carrying about the fire.

 

They look in awe at the young naked girl with the milky skin.

 

The BIGGEST of the Creatures pipes up, putting a HOOVE FOR AN ARM on her cheek.

 

                              BIGGEST CREATURE

                  This one was bathed in milk.

 

Elizabeth cringes, looking helplessly at Himlat. Himlat withdraws a stick from the fire and strikes the Biggest Creature about the hoof with it.

 

                              BIGGEST CREATURE (CONT'D)

                        (offended)

                  I was just seeing what she was made of.

 

He spits on his sizzling fur. The Biggest Creature sits back down in the circle. Himlat takes a few skinned rabbits, which are hanging from a tree branch, and cooks it over the fire. Elizabeth studies the creatures a little more carefully.

 

She SEES that most of them had been tortured: the deep seated grooves of lead-weighted whips, the craters left by the hooks, bones broken on racks, legs that had atrophied from being chained, faces that had grown paralyzed from wearing shame masks, the still-oozing seals of red-hot iron brands, the round scars where breasts had been cut off.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Where is the lion?  

                 

Great LAUGHTER from all around.

 

One of the CREATURES circles around a tree and pulls out a lion skin. He crawls inside, showing the girl the illusion. He lies across Elizabeth’s skinny lap. The lion's skin was not even skin, but some sort of straw.

 

                              HIMLAT

                  We have many such tricks to scare

                  away trespassers.

 

Elizabeth looks at her new friends, her naked milky skin compared to their coarse and tortured skin, it gives her a sense of noble pride. She sees the camps made up of knight's armor, visors, etc. It puzzles her.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Why are your houses made of knight's

                  armor?

 

                              HIMLAT

                  We ought not to tell you this, but you

                  will now live with us, I will tell you.

 

At the words, "live with us" we can see Elizabeth frown. She suddenly remembers that she's far from home.

 

                              HIMLAT (CONT'D)

                  When we first started living together,

                  we had wandered around much more than

                  in the present time. One day, we had

                  come to a battlefield where Hungarian

                  knights had fought a Turkish army.

                  Everyone had been killed or wounded.

                  At nightfall we sneaked into the field

                  of blood and stripped the fallen warriors

                  of their armor.

 

EXT. WOODS - LATER (SHORT MONTAGE)

 

Elizabeth, still naked, stays close to Himlat, as the old woman shows the girl how to collect herbs and make poisons and medicines from them. As they work, Himlat TELLS HER how to bandage wounds, cut cysts, set broken bones, and suck out snake poison.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

EXT. WOODS - LATER

 

Elizabeth dresses as Himlat sets down a basket of herbs. Himlat gives Elizabeth a mandrake root that looks like a little man. On the neck of the mandrake men are embedded two small datura flowers.

 

                              HIMLAT

                  Here, little one. You must keep this safe

                  until the time your first woman's blood

                  comes. Then you should soak the root in

                  the blood until it is sated with it.

                  After that, you should let it dry under

                  the full moon. The power of that doll

                  would be so awesome that a few simple

                  words would cause the doll to bring you

                  whatever you wished.

 

Elizabeth accepts the doll graciously.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Thank you, Himlat.

 

Elizabeth thinks about her first woman's blood.

 

                              ELIZABETH (CONT'D)

                  My first woman's blood.

                        (a beat)

                  I have heard the women at Kereshtur

                  speak about their woman's blood many

                  times and how it causes them to have

                  mood changes. I had once seen my Aunt

                  Klara tie a kerchief around her waist

                  and saw the white cotton bloom two

                  dark red roses. I had thought that

                  she were dying. But my Aunt Klara then

                  had told me that women bleed this way

                  in sympathy with our Lord on the cross.

                  This was a singular honor accorded to

                  women by Christ for love of his mother,

                  Mary. Men, who could not bleed monthly,

                  were obliged instead to shed their

                  blood in war.

 

Himlat, who is obviously a witch, nods in acknowledgement.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

EXT. WOODS - LATER

 

Elizabeth sits on a rock. Himlat is asleep. She decides it's time to find her way home.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

EXT. FIELDS - DAY

 

Elizabeth treks through the fields and trees all alone. She journeys on foot until she sees a village, and in the far distance, the walls of a castle.

 

It's not Ecsed.

 

There is the sound of a HORN and the BAYING OF HOUNDS.

 

EXT. CHURCH SQUARE - DAY

 

The square in front of the church is MOBBED with people. They are on their knees praying and crying. Tied to high stakes all around the square are NAKED REBELS, the highest stake reserved for their leader, DOZSA.

 

PASTOR PONIKENUZ (F. MURRAY ABRAHAM) stands at the highest step of the church like a lean crow cawing to the crowd.

 

Elizabeth nears the square, curiously watching the mob of people hanging on to the pastor's every word. She's surprised to HEAR her name:

 

                              PONIKENUZ

                  God, who makes and unmakes all things

                  in this world, is going to bring

                  Elizabeth Bathory back to us, unworthy

                  sinners. We beseech God in his wisdom

                  to bring back Countess Bathory to us.

                  If she comes back sound and safe, we

                  promise to give God a great feast of

                  thanks and to thank every one of the

                  saints in his church.

 

                              CROWD

                  Amen!

 

                              ONE OF THE CROWD

                  I promise to crawl on my knees to the

                  cross on the hill behind the church

                  and remain fasting there for three

                  days and two nights.

 

                              SILK MERCHANT

                  I promise five bolts of celestial blue

                  silk to make all the saints in the

                  church new dresses.

 

                              ANOTHER OF THE CROWD

                  I shall give alms to the poor every day

                  for a full year.

 

Elizabeth steps slowly, and deliberately, through the crowd. The crowd SEES her and they part like the Red Sea. Many of them FAINT, thinking they are seeing a ghost. The crowd parts in awe of her presence. Even the stern face of the PASTOR is filled with shock.

 

                              PONIKENUZ

                  Countess...

 

The crowd FALLS to their hands and knees.

 

                              PONIKENUZ (CONT'D)

                  You are home.

 

Elizabeth looks at the naked rebels on the stakes.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Are these the dogs that killed my

                  sisters?

 

Ponikenuz proudly shows her the prisoners.

 

                              PONIKENUZ

                  Yes. These are the filthy wretches

                  that has murdered your beloved

                  sisters, Anichka and Shandra, and

                  burned down Castle Ecsed. They await

                  the arrival of your uncle, the

                  palatine Thurzo.

 

THURZO (MICHAEL IRONSIDE) arrives on horseback with a mighty entourage. Elizabeth happily watches her uncle ride into the village. The MOB remains on their hands and knees.

 

                              THURZO

                  Elizabeth...you live.

 

Thurzo dismounts as a servant ties his horse to a post. He scoops up his niece and carries her up the steps of the church. He holds her up for the people, who CRY and CHEER. He shows Elizabeth the rebels.

 

                              THURZO (CONT'D)

                        (without affection)

                  They will be punished, my niece.

 

He sets her down beside him and addresses the prisoners. He unrolls an official looking document, a proclamation of their crimes.

 

                              THURZO (CONT'D)

                  You are on trial for the destruction of

                  Castle Ecsed, including the rapes and

                  murders of the servants employed there.

                  And also the brutal murder and buggering

                  of Anichka and Shandra Bathory, daughters

                  of the Baron George and the Baroness

                  Anna!

                        (a beat)

                  May you pray that God is more merciful

                  than I.

 

DOZSA’S LIEUTENANTS are taken from their stakes and sat down on a long table, as if they are guests to a great feast.

 

                              THURZO (CONT'D)

                  Sit that filthy shit down on the

                  Iron Chair.

 

Dozsa is taken down from his stake. He is moved from the stake and sat down in the Iron Chair, with a crown placed on his head. The Iron Chair itself is upon a mound of sticks to be set on fire.

 

                              PONIKENUZ

                        (low, to Thurzo)

                  Do you think it wise that the young

                  countess be audience to this?

 

                              THURZO

                  She has watched her sisters die, now

                  may her watch the retribution.

 

Dozsa spits out his last words.

 

                              DOZSA

                  Death to the nobles! Death to the

                  aristocracy! Burn me so I may be

                  immortal, you stupid cowards!

 

                              THURZO

                  Burn that wretch.

 

They light a fire underneath DOZSA’S chair. He sits there as the flames heat up the iron.

 

                              DOZSA

                  I do not fear death...uhh...I piss

                  on your damned nobles...(getting

                  harder to speak)

 

The chair gets hotter and harder, soon, DOZSA’S flesh burns. He SCREAMS in pain, heat coursing mercilessly throughout his body.

 

Elizabeth holds back the urge to vomit, the sickeningly sweet smell of DOZSA’S flesh, fresh in her nostrils.

 

Dozsa BLEEDS from his nose and eyes, bubbling out his mouth, his flesh dripping down.

 

Elizabeth LOOKS ON with morbid satisfaction as her sisters' slayer is righteously punished. She forces herself to watch even as curled up morsels of DOZSA’S brains come flying out his skull.


The CROWD below cheers at this atrocity, they SCREAM and SHOUT at the burning Dozsa. Dozsa's Lieutenants, watch as their leader meets his gruesome fate.

 

Thurzo’s men extinguish the fire, and they wait as the body cools.

 

Elizabeth waits in anticipation.

 

The Undertaker SCOOPS up pieces of Dozsa's flesh and SLAMS it onto the table. The Lieutenants cringe in horror as the Undertaker scoops up all the meat from Dozsa’s body and slam it down in front of them. Thurzo's men force them to eat the burned flesh.

 

Some refuse.

 

                              DOZSA'S LIEUTENANT

                  No! No! No!

 

They pull the ones that refuse and drag them kicking in screaming before Thurzo. Thurzo nods. Thurzo's Men unsheathe their swords and DISMEMBER them, hacking them to pieces right on the spot.

 

Elizabeth feels so much joy at the rebels' suffering that SHE WETS HERSELF, and the ground where she stands.

 

The rest of Dozsa's Lieutenants are forced to eat Dozsa's remains, some of them do it voraciously, as if they were hungry, until all that's left of Dozsa is a charred skeleton on the Iron Chair.

 

Thurzo turns to Elizabeth.

 

                              THURZO

                  My humble regrets for what happened

                  to you and your sisters.

 

Elizabeth nods sadly, who shows peculiar strength after all she has witnessed.

 

                              THURZO (CONT'D)

                        (to his Men)

                  Put them all to death, save for one,

                  I will bring him to Budapest with me

                  where I will try on him one of my

                  mechanical inventions.

 

He shakes hands with Ponikenuz.

 

                              THURZO (CONT'D)

                  Thank you, Pastor Ponikenuz.

 

                              PONIKENUZ

                  It has been a great honor, palatine

                  Thurzo.

 

Elizabeth stands in-between her uncle and the pastor, standing before the crowd. They CHEER for her. Elizabeth looks upon them with inner-satisfaction.

 

FADE TO BLACK:

 

TEXT, WHITE ON BLACK. (ANCIENT FONT)

 

                  "TWO YEARS LATER, The coronation of

                  Stephen Bathory as ruling prince of

                  Transylvania."

 

EXT. CARPATHIAN MOUNTAINS - DAY

 

Gallant carriages, with the BATHORY COAT OF ARMS painted on their sides climb up the Carpathian Mountains. Behind them following, are LADY SERVANTS carrying trunks upon trunks of the Bathorys' luggage.

 

DRAGOONS guard the carriages.

 

INT. ELIZABETH'S CARRIAGE - DAY (MOVING SHOT)

 

The carriage ROCKS about. Its occupants: young Countess Elizabeth Bathory (11), the portly figured and dear wet nurse of Elizabeth's DARVULIA (CAMRYN MANHEIM), and her pretty aunt, LADY KLARA (ROMOLA GARAI).

 

Elizabeth wiggles with excitement.

 

                              DARVULIA

                  Be still.

 

Klara hugs her niece and Elizabeth is dizzy with happiness.

 

INT. ANNA'S CARRIAGE - DAY (MOVING SHOT)

 

The Baroness ANNA BATHORY (EMBETH DAVIDTZ) sits alone in her own carriage. She is an icy beauty with detached expressions.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

EXT./INT. STEPHEN BATHORY'S CASTLE - DAY

 

A massive castle in the Carpathian Mountains. A moving ESTABLISHING SHOT, capturing the size and grandness of the castle. Activity, concerning the coronation is brimming on the inside.

 

KING MATTHIAS II (MAURY CHAYKIN) enters with a retinue of two hundred courtiers in a long carriage train. The King wears KNIGHTLY ARMOR with the cross of St. Stephen flashing proudly from his chest. His visor is down so we don't see his face.

 

GUESTS depart into the woods and return later, drunk and bloodstained, slinging wild boar over their shoulders.

 

In the BANQUET HALL, guests enjoy wine and talk amongst themselves, a sea of people.

 

STEPHEN BATHORY, a drunken teenager, looks on from the throne, at the festivities before him.

 

Many NOBLE GUESTS watch the performances of ACROBATS, ACTORS, MIMES, and MUSICIANS.

 

Before SUNSET, the TRUMPETS herald the arrival of EMPEROR MAXIMILLIAN, who rides in on a white mare at the head of 120 HORSEMEN.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

INT. BATHING AREA (WOMEN'S) - NIGHT

 

An intricate bathing area for the FEMALE GUESTS of Stephen's coronation. It's situated inside of a mountain. An underground river was made to flow around a hot mineral spring to flood a limestone quarry big enough for a thousand bathers. Steps were cut into the flesh of the mountain to allow the GUESTS to descend into the small lake, which is illuminated by torches affixed to stone boulders.

 

Additional lighting comes from TORCHES carried by SERVANTS.

 

MUSICIANS and ACROBATS perform at the sides of the pool while steam swirls about them. The cold mountain air mixed with the hot springs makes clouds of steam.

 

Elizabeth is helped into the water by her faithful maid TERESA (SAMANTHA MORTON). Elizabeth wears a cotton nightgown.

 

Elizabeth FROLICS in the warm water, floating on her back, like a lily pad. The water is deep and mysterious, blackened by the darkness below. Underneath, are the FANTASTICAL FIGURES of unknown bodies, swimming around inside it.

 

Elizabeth lets herself drift on the surface of the water and BUMPS into a couple of bodies. Elizabeth is startles and quickly SEES that she has bumped into TWO BATHING GIRLS. She admires their womanly bodies, with their meaty breasts and dark nipples. Their arms are intertwined with each other’s and their mouths are sealed in a kiss. They don't seem to have even noticed the light bump that Elizabeth had given them.

 

With her curiosity aroused, Elizabeth looks on. She DIVES under the water.

 

INT. UNDERWATER

 

Elizabeth encircles them with her arms, feeling the curves of their buttocks with her forearms. She's trying to form a circle, but her skinny arms can't reach all the way around.

 

INT. BATHING AREA (WOMEN'S) - NIGHT

 

The TWO BATHING GIRLS, startled, pull violently apart.

 

INT. UNDERWATER

 

Elizabeth finds herself FLOUNDERING, thrashing about in the water, drowning.

 

INT. BATHING AREA (WOMEN'S) - NIGHT

 

Elizabeth FLAPS HER ARMS in the water, SCREAMING FOR HELP.

 

A WOMAN grabs Elizabeth. TERESA comes running to the pool. The Woman delivers Elizabeth to Teresa. Teresa carries the still SCREAMING CHILD away from the bathing area.

 

INT. ANNA'S CHAMBER (SBC) - NIGHT

 

The great door of Anna's chamber opens, revealing Teresa holding a quivering Elizabeth.

 

Elizabeth PEERS INSIDE and screams louder.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                        (screaming)

                  THEY KILLED HER!! THEY KILLED HER!!

 

There's a sound of rustling silk, the jingle of spurs, and the breaking of glass. SERVANTS come rushing in from the hall. One of them lights a torch.

 

Anna emerges from her canopy, her long red hair undone, her gown lowered exposing her breasts. She SCOWLS through the darkness.

 

A NAKED MAN moves closely behind her, holding up one of his boots.

Elizabeth looks on and BURSTS INTO LAUGHTER, annoying her mother even further. She tries to curtsy, but instead, falls over on her face. Anna stands very still, quivering with ANGER, in front of the ASSEMBLED SERVANTS.

 

She SHOUTS at her daughter.

 

                              ANNA

                  Your time has come, little monster!

 

Elizabeth reacts in SURPRISE at the shouting of her mother. Her blood ices over on the spot.

 

EXT. OUTDOOR THEATER - DAY

 

A small outdoor theater, arranged with an AUDIENCE sitting on STONE BENCHES that encircle the stage.

 

Elizabeth sits down not far from a FIFTEEN-YEAR-OLD BOY who watches the performance eagerly.

 

Below is a puppet-play. The puppets are ten-feet tall, representing ANIMALS and CLERGYMEN. The CROW flapped his motley rags around, shaming a drunken nun who has done something to a nun.

 

The BOY laughs UPROARIOUSLY. He is JOHANNES. Elizabeth obviously is not seeing the humor in the scene.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Where is the humor this scene?

 

The BOY blushes.

 

                              JOHANNES

                  I have seen monks like this one. We

                  have monasteries full of such monks!

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  What is your name, boy?

 

                              JOHANNES

                  My name is Johannes. I am a member

                  of Prince Rudolf's choir. He is the

                  son of Emperor Maximillian.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  I am Elizabeth Bathory.

 

                              JOHANNES

                        (stunned)

                  You are a countess.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  That is right.

 

The boy blushes.

 

                              JOHANNES

                  I am pleased to make your acquaintance,

                  young Countess.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  You speak German.

 

                              JOHANNES

                  Yes. I speak Latin, German, and Greek.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  No Hungarian?

 

                              JOHANNES

                  I am afraid that I do not.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  I speak all those languages except for

                  Greek. I have an interest in words

                  that goes beyond the urgings of the monk,

                  Silvestri.

 

                              JOHANNES

                  I too, have a thirst for knowledge. I

                  study geometry and astrology at

                  Hraschin Castle.

                        (a beat)

                  My own gift for acquiring languages had

                  come entirely naturally without any help

                  from a teacher. At Hraschin Castle, I

                  had listened to the conversations of so

                  many scholars from everywhere in the

                  Christian world, that I had found myself

                  conversing in many tongues without

                  difficulty.

 

Elizabeth is impressed with her new friend.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Is it true that Rudolf buggers the boys'

                  choir?

 

Her ulterior motive, trying to figure out what that damned word means.

 

Just then, in the puppet show, an EAGLE JUDGE as appeared and he is demanding the DRUNKEN MONK to demonstrate what exactly he did to the nun.

 

LAUGHTER surrounds the two children, just as JOHANNES answers her question. The answer is inaudible. Elizabeth looks disappointed.

 

INT. GREAT CHAPEL - DAY

 

The coronation. Elizabeth sits with her new friend Johannes during the coronation. She's dressed in an elegant formal dress.

 

BISHOPS in resplendent PURPLE ROBES followed by a retinue of MONKS advance towards the bejeweled throne in which a slightly drunk STEPHEN BATHORY sits looking dazed. The ARCHBISHOP carries a GOLD CROWN on a BLACK VELVET PILLOW.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                        (softly to Johannes)

                  Is it true that Rudolf buggers the boys'

                  choir?

 

He blushes.

 

                              JOHANNES

                        (softly)

                  Yes.

 

The great PIPES of the cathedral let out their music. VOICES singing HYMNS OF PRAISE fill the vaults. Stephen Bathory has become Prince of Transylvania.

 

INT. STONE HALL - DAY

 

Elizabeth walks with Johannes down a stone hall leading to an ancient donjon in the oldest part of the castle.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Would you allow me to watch you be

                  buggered?

 

Johannes looks at her with surprise.

 

                              ELIZABETH (CONT'D)

                  I understand very well that I wouldn't

                  be able to watch you be buggered by

                  Rudolf himself, given his objection to

                  the presence of women in his vicinity.

                 

 

                              JOHANNES

                  Forgive me, young Countess, but might

                  I inquire this curiosity with

                  buggering?

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  I have told you that I have a fondness

                  for knowing the meanings behind words

                  that go even beyond the urgings of

                  my tutor, the monk Silvestri.

                        (a beat)

                  I want witness a live buggering to

                  satisfy my curiosity.

 

Johannes thinks for a beat. Then he blushes.

 

                              JOHANNES

                  I pledge myself to your service, young

                  Countess. And I will service you in

                  any way that you wish.

                        (a beat)

                  But how do you think we should go about

                  carrying out your wish?

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Maybe we could approach one of the

                  archbishop's monks to perform the

                  deed.

 

Elizabeth Bathory is from one of the most powerful families in all of Hungary. Johannes is slightly amused by her innocence; she clearly has no idea what she is talking about.

 

                              JOHANNES

                  How shall we approach a monk? This

                  is a very sensitive thing to

                  approach the monk for.

 

A beat.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Then, what do you suggest?

 

A GYPSY SLAVE walks up to him with his palm outstretched, he falls to his knees in front of the two children.

 

                              GYPSY

                        (begging)

                  Please, young beauty. Can you spare

                  a copper coin? Your beauty is a gift

                  from heaven and I kneel before thee.

                  I commend your discriminating taste

                  in choosing this fearless knight by

                  your side to walk with thee.

 

Johannes blushes, hardly a "brave knight," with his velvet tights, and non-possession of a sword.

 

                              GYPSY (CONT'D)

                  I am a slave attached to one of the

                  lesser nobles who owns a puppet

                  troupe. A copper coin is all that I

                  ask of you, young beauty.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  I bid you rise and walk with us.

 

The Gypsy follows and Elizabeth guides them through a less-traveled passage.

 

INT. STONE LEDGE - DAY

 

Elizabeth, The Gypsy, and Johannes climb up onto a stone ledge just below a window looking out from the castle.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                        (to the Gypsy)

                  I want you to bugger Johannes.

 

The Gypsy looks confused. Fearing her wish may be too daring, she changes tone.

 

                              ELIZABETH (CONT'D)

                  I am Countess Bathory. I have the

                  power of life and death over you.

                  You must do what I tell you!

 

The Gypsy looks up at her quickly and gives a short laugh.

 

                              GYPSY

                  It never occurred to me to doubt the

                  legitimacy of my mistress's command.

                  I was merely pausing in order to

                  ponder how much I should be paid.

                  And I confess that I am most

                  reluctant to bugger a baronet, since

                  the position demands rather that the

                  baronet should bugger me. If word

                  had gotten out that I had done such

                  a thing to a baronet, my head

                  wouldn't last long  on my shoulders.

                        (a beat)

                  But knowing it would be dreadfully

                  foolish to refuse, I stand completely

                  at your service.

 

Feeling generous, Elizabeth takes a gold chain, which hangs a small garnet from around her neck, and tosses it to the Gypsy. He catches it and falls to his knees, nearly FALLING OFF THE LEDGE, to kiss the hem of her dress.

 

Johannes watches the proceedings with a mixture of excitement and dread. He decides to make his presence felt.

 

                              JOHANNES

                  Not here. At nightfall, the three of

                  us shall meet by the fountain in the

                  smallest courtyard, which is near

                  Iskender Bey's harem.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Agreed. We shall meet then.

 

DISSOLVE TO:

 

INT. ELIZABETH'S CHAMBER (SBC) - NIGHT

 

Teresa tucks Elizabeth under the covers of her large canopy bed. Elizabeth FEIGNS SLEEP as her maid looks on. When Teresa is satisfied that Elizabeth is asleep, she quietly tiptoes out of the room.

 

And the sound of the DOOR closing, Elizabeth hops out of bed and throws on a dark dress over purple leggings, an outfit that makes her look like a boy.

 

INT. GREAT HALLS - NIGHT

 

Elizabeth, in her boyish disguise, slips past several doors, hugging close to the walls, and steps over sleeping SOLDIERS.

 

INT. INNER COURTYARD - NIGHT

 

A sickle-thin Turkish moon appears in the night sky.

 

Elizabeth crosses over to the small fountain, feeling the walls, and finding her way through the dark.

 

                              JOHANNES (O.S.)

                  Countess?

 

                              ELIZABETH

                        (softly)

                  Yes.

 

Elizabeth feels for his hand in the dark. A beat.

 

                              ELIZABETH (CONT'D)

                  Where is the Gypsy?

 

                              JOHANNES

                  He has not come yet.

 

They wait for a beat, Johannes holding Elizabeth's hand.

 

INT. ELIZABETH'S CHAMBER (SBC) - NIGHT

                 

Elizabeth TOSSES and TURNS in her bed. The events of the night fresh in her mind, she HUMS wistfully in her sleep, legs twitching under her covers.

 

We HEAR the sounds of the previous scene over this:

 

                              GYPSY (V.O.)

                  Your devoted slave is here, Countess.

 

We HEAR Johannes try to suppress his MOANS.

 

                              JOHANNES (V.O.)

                        (strenuous)

                  This for you, my mistress. All for

                  you. Ohh-ooh.

 

Elizabeth is almost feverish in delight, she rolls around in her bed as the soundtrack plays in her mind.

 

                              ELIZABETH (V.O.)

                        (ghostly)

                  Women, (pause) make dolls out of

                  those they know...

 

                              GYPSY (V.O.)

                  I am at your command, my mistress.

 

EXT. KERESHTUR CASTLE - NIGHT (1568)

 

It is now the year 1568. One year before the siege of Dozsa. One year before the death of Elizabeth's sisters.

 

It's a fierce winter with the wind blowing snow, kicking it up into misty white clouds. The castle walls are covered with this powdery cold. It looks like hell has frozen over. The moonlight bounces off the snow blankets, illuminating everything as if it were a scene from a gothic painting.

 

A SUPER appears in the bottom-right corner of the screen:

 

                  "CASTLE KERESHTUR, The Winter Of

                  1568 A.D."

 

Another SUPER appears below the first one:

 

                  "One year before the peasant siege

                  against Castle Ecsed."

 

INT. CASTLE KERESHTUR - NIGHT

 

The fierce winter of 1568 drives everyone indoors and gave notice that outside life must cease.  Games, entertainments, and contests have been carefully planned. The cellars and larders are stuffed with wines, viands, and fruit. Hunting parties bring back pheasants, bear, moose, and deer, whose salted carcasses hang from hooks in limestone rooms. Barrels full of lard and salted fish along with rows of dried meat line the pantry walls.

 

TRAVELERS pay for their room and board with tales of strange places, songs, poems, and lies of every sort. There is also a troupe of ACROBATS from Russia, in addition to Siamese-twin musicians, one of whom pays the harp with his feet while the other sings mournful ballads in a language no one has heard before. Together they look like a two-headed musical fountain.

 

INT. SMALL HALL (K) - NIGHT

 

Elizabeth sits with her young friend, ANDREI DE KERESHTUR (8), before a ROARING FIRE.  The great walls of the castle gallantly keep out the fierce Hungarian cold.

 

Andrei de Kereshtur has a noticeable hump on his back that he neglects to hide under a specially tailored cloak.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  ...Peasants, priests, and nobles are

                  made of exactly the same materials

                  and are therefore, equally

                  perishable.

                        (a beat)

                  No one has been able to locate where

                  nobility is located in the human

                  body. Therefore, nobility, unlike

                  the soul--which has been seen

                  studied, and located in the liver--

                  offered one no guaranteed durability.

 

Andrei, used to the wild opinions of his mistress, is shocked by her comment.

 

                              ANDREI

                  How could you think this, my lady?

                  Nobility is in the blood. The blood

                  is immortal. You are making the

                  mistake of Greek atomists!

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Is it?

 

Elizabeth unfastens her collar, taking out the gold pin that held it together. With pursed lips and a look of glee on her face, she sticks the pin on the pillow of flesh on top of her fist.

 

A drop of blood appears.

 

                              ELIZABETH (CONT'D)

                  Noble blood?

                        (a beat)

                  Then drink it, friend, and you can

                  be noble too!

 

Andrei looks at her, not taking her seriously at first, reads the seriousness on her face. He gently licks the blood from her fist.

 

INT. CASTLE ARCHIVE (K) - DAY

 

Andrei helps his father, NOTARY DE KERESHTUR, with the castles documents. While the two talk about the business of being a scribe Elizabeth amuses herself by reading random scrolls and ledgers. She also studies an ancient MAP OF KERESHTUR CASTLE.

 

She notes the intricate secret passageways.

 

INT. BARN - DAY

 

It's a bitterly cold day. A HORSE GROOMER tends to the horses. He crosses over to a PILE OF STRAW and grabs a clump to feed the horses with. He's surprised to find that underneath, are TWO BROADSWORDS.

 

INT. GARRISON - DAY

 

A feeble man, BRUNOS, a horse-groomer, is stood up before the GARRISON COMMANDER, whom looks at him sternly.

 

His LIEUTENANTS and a number of SOLDIERS who are milling about polishing boots and weapons attend the Commander.

 

                              GARRISON COMMANDER

                  Explain yourself, Brunos.

 

                              BRUNOS

                  I wanted the broad swords, because they

                  were so shiny. So shiny and I wanted to

                  see my face in them.

 

There's a ROAR OF LAUGHTER from everyone in the room. Some have TEARS in their eyes. Bruno hangs his head in shame, not laughing. When the laughter DIES DOWN, the Garrison Commander continues his line of questioning.

 

                              GARRISON COMMANDER

                  Why did you...want to see your face in

                  the swords?

 

                              BRUNOS

                  Because I have never seen my face, my

                  lord...save for its reflection in

                  moving water.

 

                              GARRISON COMMANDER

                  Why did you not ask one of the maids of

                  the court ladies to let you see yourself

                  in one of their looking glasses?

 

                              BRUNOS

                        (shamefully)

                  I do not know any maids, my lord. But I

                  did plan on meeting one if I were

                  suitable enough in my appearance to do

                  so.

 

                              GARRISON COMMANDER

                        (amazed)

                  And if you were not suitable enough,

                  what then would you have done?

 

                              BRUNOS

                  I would have used the swords to cut

                  my body and died.

 

Elizabeth APPEARS from the shadows of the room. She STARTLES everyone when she makes her presence known.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Shouldn't the thief be tortured?

 

                              GARRISON COMMANDER

                  Of course, my lady, but you must not

                  watch his punishment.

 

The Garrison Commander motions to one of the SOLDIERS. The Soldier escorts the young girl out of the visible door.

 

INT. KLARA'S CHAMBER (K) - DAY

 

Lady Klara tarts herself up in front of the mirror. Elizabeth talks to her aunt, while her aunt is distracted with her own appearance.

 

                              KLARA

                  Why were you so keen on watching a

                  thief get tortured?

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  I wanted to know what torture actually

                  was.

 

                              KLARA

                  Oh? You had no idea what the word

                  actually meant?

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  I have heard Preacher Heber talk of

                  "ennobling effects of torture, which,

                  by imitating the fleshly torments of

                  our Lord Jesus Christ, purifies the

                  victim for judgment."

 

Klara makes FACES at herself in the mirror.

 

                              KLARA

                  I would not listen too studiously

                  to the ramblings of Preacher Hebler.

                  The man is an old fool.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Then, why does mother make me take

                  theology classes from him?

 

                              KLARA

                  Because your mother wants you to

                  go to heaven when you die. She

                  believes in the teachings of

                  Martinus Luther and wants you to

                  grow up with the same wisdom.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  When I had sheared Preacher Hebler's

                  fox-hat, he made me memorize all of

                  Doctor Luther's book, Chronicles.

                  Doctor Luther does not like women

                  at all. He believes that we are the

                  devil's conduit. I trust that he is

                  more fond of roasts and gravy, since

                  he is proportioned like an oak barrel

                  full of pig lard.

 

Klara laughs at this.

 

                              KLARA

                  Martinus indeed a glutton, he was.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  I also heard the word "torture" used

                  by Darvulia. She had told Teresa to

                  stop "torturing her."

 

Klara laughs again.

 

EXT. BALCONY OVERLOOKING GARRISON (K) - DAY

 

Elizabeth sneaks onto the balcony, overlooking just above the garrison. She HEARS the cries of BRUNOS as he is being tortured from inside.

 

The SOLDIERS (three of them) come dragging Brunos's broken body out the door. They tie his wrists and feet to a wooden post.

 

Brunos's MOUTH is a swollen purple rose, articulating something that didn't escape his throat. His eyes are wide open, two iridescent blue stones.

 

Two of the Soldiers cross in front of Brunos, while the other looks on, the two broadswords he had stolen.

 

Brunos shoots a melancholy gaze at his reflection.

 

His face disappears soon after, as the two Soldiers DRIVE the swords right THROUGH his head. Blood and pulpy meat smatter the post, ruby specks of blood SPLATTER on the faces of the two Soldiers.

 

Elizabeth looks on with a mixture of horror and excitement.

 

Brunos's face is SPLIT down to the neck, into two halves. They PLOP down to the ground, like the petals of a flower from its stem. The Soldiers LAUGH maliciously and saunter off.

 

Elizabeth keeps watching, as if expecting something else to happen. Brunos, head severed into two halves, remains hitched to the post. We LINGER on this for a beat.

 

Then, TWO CRONES dressed in BLACK CLOAKS, emerge and see the body. They glance furtively about. Quick as lighting, one of them produces a knife from her cloak and proceeds to cut off Brunos's hands at the wrist.

 

The other, with one quick and smooth action, cuts off Brunos's PENIS, which has hardened at the moment of death. In broad daylight, in the middle of the street, Elizabeth watches. She can't believe what she is seeing.

 

She WATCHES as the Cronies casually depart with their morbid new collectibles. A beat later, a COUPLE OF CART-PULLING PEASANTS come by. They untie the corpse and unceremoniously dump him into the cart and wheel him away.

 

INT. KLARA'S CHAMBER - DAY (K)

 

Elizabeth comes BURSTING into her aunt's chamber, surprising Klara. She tells her aunt, excitedly, what she had seen:

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Aunt Klara! I had watched the soldiers

                  torture the thief, and then they drove

                  a sword through her face! And then

                  later, these two cronies came out and

                  they cut off the thief's hands and one

                  even cut off his...(doesn't know the

                  words) "thing!"

 

Klara laughs, so uproariously that Elizabeth can't help but join in, although at the moment she failed to see the humor.

 

Klara removed a HARLEQUIN DOLL from the table under the mirror and sticks it in front of her dress.

 

                              KLARA

                  She cut off his thing, this thing?

 

She makes exaggerated gestures with her hips, pushing the doll forward like a penis. Elizabeth doesn't seem to understand.

 

                              KLARA (CONT'D)

                  Sit on the bench next to me.

 

Elizabeth joins her aunt on her bench. Klara lifts up her voluminous skirt and reveals her petticoat. She turns to Elizabeth and straddles the bench. Holding her skirt with one hand, she pushes her undergarment aside.

                              KLARA (CONT'D)

                  Position the Harlequin between my

                  legs.

 

Elizabeth does, nestling the doll between her legs, trapping him there. Klara lowers her dress like a curtain over the doll.

 

                              KLARA (CONT'D)

                  Sit upon my lap.

 

Elizabeth does, wiggling uncomfortably, as the doll pokes between her skinny buttocks.

 

                              KLARA (CONT'D)

                  Do you understand now?

 

Elizabeth still does not.

 

INT. CASTLE WINDOW - DAY (K)

 

Elizabeth and Andrei stare out the big castle window with their villages and church spread out like a tapestry.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Why do you have a hump, Andrei?

 

                              ANDREI

                  I just do. I was just born with

                  one.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  May I see your hump?

 

                              ANDREI

                        (self-conscious)

                  Why do you want to see my hump, my

                  lady?

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  I want to see if it is hollow.

 

                              ANDREI

                  I assure you that it is not.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  I want to see for myself. If you

                  do have a hollow hump, I don't

                  want you hiding things form me.

 

                              ANDREI     

                  I would never hide things from you,

                  my lady.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  Show me your hump, Andrei de

                  Kereshtur.

 

Andrei lets Elizabeth squeeze it, prod it, and poke it. She takes the PIN from her brooch and STICKS IT. Andrei SCREAMS in pain, not liking this one bit.

 

                              ANDREI

                        (painfully)

                  I ASSURE YOU THAT IT IS FULL!

 

Elizabeth leaves him, satisfied. She smiles at him.

 

                              ELIZABETH

                  It is full. There is nothing you

                  can hide from me because it is

                  impossible.

 

                              ANDREI

                  I will be plain as daylight with

                  you at all times, my lady.

 

EXT. CITY STREETS (CITY OF PEST) - DAY

 

A SUPER appears at the bottom-right corner of the screen:

 

                  "CITY OF PEST"

 

PEST is a noisy and exciting city with big houses and carriages stuck in the mud. Andrei and Elizabeth accompany Andrei's father; Notary de Kereshtur, through the snow covered streets of the city.

 

Notary de Kereshtur seems to be lost in his own thoughts as he escorts the children.

 

Elizabeth has her mouth and eyes wide open, taking in the sights and sounds of Pest.

 

All the HOUSES seem built on top of one another and leaning on perilous angles. The streets are full of donkeys laden with all kinds of merchandise, and prostitutes in every doorway, breasts exposed, striped cloth around their waists, the emblem of their profession.

 

Andrei keeps his eyes to the ground in mortified dismay. Elizabeth is quite thrilled.

 

They reach a Jewish Bookstore.

 

INT. JEWISH BOOKSTORE - DAY

 

Notary, Andrei, and Elizabeth are greeted by the Jew BEN LEBUS. Notary and ben Lebus shake hands and he sits them all down to a cup of hot wine. The Notary and ben Lebus begin to have a long conversation about man's fate, history, and God's hidden design.

 

The gist of it is pretty much this: